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Summer Shore by Mewscaper Summer Shore by Mewscaper
I want to be away... Far away...

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Characters Game Freak, Pokemon Inc., Creatures Inc., Nintendo
Artwork Mewscaper, on Paint Tool SAI

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PokemonForeverFan Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Wow... I can't paint lineless.
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demolishernorbi Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awww so cute <3
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Xeerinare Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Really nice picture. :)
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Kuro-No-Yuki Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Student Digital Artist
awesome work you got here ^^
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thereelBT Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this is a pretty picture. i like how mew looks in the corner :)
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ElleSensei Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I don't like the DeviantArt critique system, but I will give some feedback. The foreground looks really nice - quite detailed. The figures and objects are well drawn.

The lighting looks off. I can't quite tell where the light source is. I can tell that the characters are sitting under trees in the shade. Light falls on the beach, but then seems to dissipate too quickly on the water. If there were more reflections on the water, then there I could see from which direction the sun is shining.

The objects in the distance are too detailed, especially the water. Less lines and more solid color - same thing with the sky at the horizon line. You would want to do the same things with the rocks. They look very close to the subjects in the picture. If you want them to seem father away then they need less detail. You can smudge the colors together for a more blurred effect rather than the strokes.

Hope any of this is helpful. I like your picture and think you can make some great improvements to it! :D
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Mewscaper Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for your critique! This is the sort of feedback I was looking for. I'll be leaving this particular piece as is, but I will consider your comments for future scenes.
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kittyface27 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i love the dragonite in the background. isnt that what its called?
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MiriCat Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012
Its dragonair xD
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kittyface27 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i was close! i havnt watch pokemon since i started naruto
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